Very professional look to your site. The navigation is very easy to figure out. Nice use of images. The girl watching everything is an interesting idea. Very nice David!!
The site is very evocative, with a good choice of images and audio. Unfortunately it doesn't work in Safari, but works well with Firefox. You should implement a 'hand' on the GO rollover on the splash page to let the user know it is active. The integration of the little girl and her paintpot interface into your pages is well done, and the use of flash animation is subtle and well done. You must create a credits page, and give credit for all of those beautiful images. Get an editor to check your text, I noticed a couple of grammatical errors in the Manifesto, which spoils the confident effect you have created with the graphics. You certainly need to find a suitable way to show your own work which is not overpowered by the strong background imagery you have chosen. I saw some samples briefly in the work section, but they have now disappeared. It is a major weakness of the site, as it is intended to show off your portfolio!
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the link is not working :P
awesome work buddy.
I love your images and the way it leads user to navigate.
nevermind.. its just me .. last time I saw your website my reaction was "wow" .. and its still really great. It's so interesting and interactive!
Very professional look to your site. The navigation is very easy to figure out. Nice use of images. The girl watching everything is an interesting idea. Very nice David!!
The site is very evocative, with a good choice of images and audio. Unfortunately it doesn't work in Safari, but works well with Firefox. You should implement a 'hand' on the GO rollover on the splash page to let the user know it is active. The integration of the little girl and her paintpot interface into your pages is well done, and the use of flash animation is subtle and well done. You must create a credits page, and give credit for all of those beautiful images. Get an editor to check your text, I noticed a couple of grammatical errors in the Manifesto, which spoils the confident effect you have created with the graphics. You certainly need to find a suitable way to show your own work which is not overpowered by the strong background imagery you have chosen. I saw some samples briefly in the work section, but they have now disappeared. It is a major weakness of the site, as it is intended to show off your portfolio!
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